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It looks very natural.
I used a part of it for my deviation - here [link]
Thanks for a great job!
you talking about the spacing between lines or between the paragraphs. the line leading is i think 8/12. so 1 over the 3rd
Thanks for the tips. Good constructive comment.
But there's still stuff to look for if you want to have it looking the best and being readable~
Margins on the inside looks a little tight, and quite generous leading for the body copy (which looks a little strange at places)
Page number on the inside of the margin?
Crazy tracking for the title, but I think thats more of a design chocie - not too picky on that
Don't get me wrong, I like what you've done with the design, and its wonderful to see. But there's just so much that can go wrong when we deal with type, just thought I would pass on what people have told me
old style typography but rella good
it almost looks like it was done by letterpress